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'Cause if you hadn't found me

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'Cause if you hadn't found me
I would have found you
I would have found you

It was your first taste of love
Living upon what you had

It's the first thing you see when you open your eyes
The last thing you say as your saying goodbye
Something inside you is crying and driving you on

'Cause if you hadn't found me
I would have found you
Image size
1784x1920px 1.52 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
FE25,X20
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
Aperture
F/3.1
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Apr 22, 2010, 5:29:11 PM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

i must start to say this is an overdone concept, if you browse through DA you will find a lot of similar images, some better executed than others but all around this.

about the image as a whole it is pretty pleasing to look at by i think it has some technical and post-processing flaws. i think you have potential to explore your technique. i would like to see this less red, the lower right corner has a lot of red tones in opposite of the upper left corner that is too bright. i really like backlit photos but i think you have to experiment more on that.

the image will also look better if it was sharper and if it had a wider range of tones.

about the framing it is almost a square and i think it would look better if it really was a square and had a smaller framing.

i think the composition is good, the way the hands are placed is really natural and also the way she is holding the necklace looks very spontaneous and beautiful.

i hope this encourages you to keep trying and experimenting because i think you already have some good experience in photography <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>